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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Since from my perspective it's a fable not a hard sci-fi story, I feel there isn't really a requirement for it to obey the criteria of realism in either of the points you mention. The story is at one level no more realistic than Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, so these inconsistencies, at least to my mind, scarely register at all. I'm not saying your points are nit picking, I just feel they're not relevant to the type of story at least as I perceive it, more mythical than grounded.

Regarding the ending, in many ways it resembles the Ursula Le Guin story "The Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas" which is about a perfect utopia - which this isn't, by any means, but it at least functions as a society - which is built on the suffering of one child. A magical fable with no pretensions at reality.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Ones_Who_Walk_Away_from_Omelas

When the people of that world know that truth, some walk away and some are content to live in this secretly cruel society. That "walking away" ending is scarcely possible from a speeding train, so by default the ending here has to be what it is. Once the terms of the world are set up, only complete destruction of the train-world can suffice for a moral-fable outcome. So again, it works perfectly as political-social fable, not in any way as a realistic story.

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Big fan of this one!

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